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Anyone got a poem to tell?

I have! And I wrote it myself:

S'Nowmans Land

Nomans land in winter,
is bleak bitter and cold.
There is no-one around
for miles and miles and miles.

But out of the corner of my eye,
I see a shadowy shape,
a familiar face
staring at me through the fog.

A snowman, not making any movement,
yet he plays with my mind
and speaks to me too with silent words.
He lives in (S')Nomans land.

Do you like it?
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Wow, it's very enigmatic, what inspired it?

I used to write a lot when I was even younger than you but can't remember most of it. This is one I can just about remember from when I was a kid:

I long to fly, so long to fly
Imagine soaring in the sky
I dream of ships and cars and things
But most of all I dream of wings

There was more but it's all gone from my brain after such a long time

I will concede yours is a lot more poetic!
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I like your poem. I can empathize with the feeling of being alone and then seeing something or someone you recognize and your mood changes.

I also like the dreamy feeling of your poem, Supersmithy

I used to write a lot of poems when I was a few years younger and I posted them on some poem site. I totally forgot about it and I suddenly got emails telling me someone has commented on them. Long detailed comments. This person challenges me to write a new one (this actually happened to me this morning), so I made one real quick about my cat. Now this person thinks I am a great mum. He doesn't know it's about my cat, but she IS my baby, so it's sort of correct.

Approaching the Complete:

Glorious she is
Humming like a bird
Early in the morning
Darling. Baby. Dear.

Alone you never will be
Not with her

Extraordinary she is
My sleeping beauty
In the afternoon
Darling. Baby. Dear.

Happy you will be
Always with her

Wonderful she is
Sparkles in her eyes
Late at night
Darling. Baby. Dear.

Unconditional love
Miraculous she is
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I didn't know some members here are poets ! You all got talent !!
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I like your poem. I can empathize with the feeling of being alone and then seeing something or someone you recognize and your mood changes.

I also like the dreamy feeling of your poem, Supersmithy

I used to write a lot of poems when I was a few years younger and I posted them on some poem site. I totally forgot about it and I suddenly got emails telling me someone has commented on them. Long detailed comments. This person challenges me to write a new one (this actually happened to me this morning), so I made one real quick about my cat. Now this person thinks I am a great mum. He doesn't know it's about my cat, but she IS my baby, so it's sort of correct.

Approaching the Complete:

Glorious she is
Humming like a bird
Early in the morning
Darling. Baby. Dear.

Alone you never will be
Not with her

Extraordinary she is
My sleeping beauty
In the afternoon
Darling. Baby. Dear.

Happy you will be
Always with her

Wonderful she is
Sparkles in her eyes
Late at night
Darling. Baby. Dear.

Unconditional love
Miraculous she is

Oh I loove this - just how I feel about both my girls!
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Oh I loove this - just how I feel about both my girls!
When I read that poem, I felt the same about my Princess, Lady and Earl :

Late at night
Darling. (Princess) Baby. (Lady) Dear. (Earl)

Unconditional love
Miraculous they are


Sorry I had to alter your poem to suit my mood ...(and thank you in advance)
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I'm glad you guys liked it. Yay me!
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i'm not a poet myself but i enjoy listening
to poems that are romantic.. just like sonnet 18
by shakespeare..

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:


i like the part Shall I compare thee to a summer's day..
with the right tone it can make any woman fall in love..
 
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Sounds very seasonal... A good one for this month (May) ... I already fell in love ..
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